With only two pages shown so far it's obviously a bit too early to say with any degree of certainty, but I like what I see so far. My only real issue is that the font is rather difficult to read, but even then it's not too challenging.
Thanks for the feedback. I was a bit worried the font might be a touch too over the top, especially the white text on black, but my thought was that I wanted it to look more like it was how she would write it and it would contrast to another characters writing, or spoken words in later pages. I’ll give it another good look and see if it needs some finessing.